a plead. 
a prayer. 

a short poem (iterative poem) exploring the grieving process, as a longterm relationship just ended for me. i tried to make it for the Out Of Mana #1 Jam. headphones in, sound on — that's where the heart(beat) is!

i tried to do the "rhythm" and "sacrifice" side quests but it is poorly executed to say the least. sorry for this.

the ending is not at all satisfying, and it loops and loops and repeats itself, but i guess that's the point? not a good game, not even a good poem, just a personal process i figured What the hell, might as well let others experience it too.

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StatusReleased
PlatformsHTML5
Rating
Rated 4.9 out of 5 stars
(7 total ratings)
Authornurbrun
GenreInteractive Fiction
Made withTwine
Tagsbreak-up, grief, hyperlink, loss, mourn, mourning, outofmanajam, poem, Text based, Twine

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100beavesasinbeavers9 days ago

i'm absolutely shocked that there are no comments actually. i was poking around itchio but this was so amazing that i had to say something, anything.

i don't think i have the words but i love this so so much. holy. please never stop writing. 

if nurbrun has a million fans, then i am one of them. if nurbrun has ten fans, then i am one of them. if nurbrun has only one fan then that is me. if nurbrun has no fans, then that means i am no longer on earth. if the world is against nurbrun, then i am against the world.

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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